A rhyme-royal.

We are living in a rose-tinted nation, 
Trying to live up to our own declarations,
Avoiding participation in our own rehabilitation,
Yet we still choose depression as our safety station.

We surround ourselves with distorted imagery,
Illusions and delusions of how we ought to be,
Fighting for vanity and unrealistic dreams of equality,
Yet racism still a well known philosophy.

We place our goals just within our reach,
We use empty books to educate and teach,
We memorize our perfect speech, ‘donate to aid relief,’
Yet obesity is our number one retreat.

We follow the rules on how to behave, 
Make notes of what and to whom we gave,
Pray to God to be saved, for all our sins he did forgave,
Yet a mortgage pays for the tombstone on our grave.

Our eyes have closed in this rose tinted-nation,
As the economy rose we sacrificed our identification,
Lost our salvation in the walls of our self built concentration
And we pity them with their lack of complication.

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  • Aiyanna on May 23, 2011

    Roses are grown by planting pieces of the stem with a bud in fertile soil to create a new bush. Remember not where they are growing but remember the beauty it emits in the surroundings it blooms in. It will help create an identity and a landmark that people would remember you for. (Remember Stupid Rose?? That is synonmous with Lovely Honey because of the picture)… Create a pathway for tomorrow with the rose you have and make it your Landmark….
    Roses make Rose water, perfumes, soaps, bouquets, drinks and sweets. Choose to be one of them…

  • V rank on May 23, 2011

    very inspiring piece of poetry…

  • CHIPMUNK on May 24, 2011

    Great poetry

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