Poem about a very sad, neglected child.

Sad child

Parents neglect

Painful journey

Dangerous trek

You must be strong

To survive

Please sad child

Stay alive

Cries of danger

Cries of fear

Please hold on

Help is near

Sad child

One day

You’ll wipe those tears away

And hear pleasant songs

To dance and play

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  • Goodselfme on Nov 22, 2009

    Nice happy ending to a mostly sad poem with much truth. Well composed.

  • lillyrose on Nov 22, 2009

    I bet there are quite a few children that could relate to that poem, nicely presented.

  • lucia anna on Nov 22, 2009

    Many thanks for this poem. Wonderful.

  • PhoenixRox on Nov 25, 2009

    Aww Steven, this was really sweet. A poem to all those children in pain. God bless.

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