A poem about being wildly safe!

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The winter eve did cast its chill,
But summoned me to warm-ed lure,
Where pine-laden walls captured heat
Like diffusing layers of fur.

My sensual response exploded
As I unchilled beside the fire
And fixed atop the rugged floor,
Safely free of nature’s mire.

Simmering in cylindered glass,
Sugared scent of vanilla bean
Reeled the air with projected flame
Upon cinnamon-colored screen.

He appeared then, to my delight,
Like morning rays to greet the day,
With grinning eyes and soothing voice,
Demure in style, but strength in way.

He pulled me close into his chest
And wrapped me in his link-ed arms
Like precious gems in velvet case,
Where I could not resist his charms.

He kissed my lips with hungered lunge
To taste the part of me that smiled,
And we explored our appetites
Like animals out in the wild.

Safe in his cabin, I let go,
And set all inhibitions free,
Unstirred by the cold world outside,
I let his love slip into me.

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  • Papa Sparks on Nov 4, 2009

    Liked this one a lot. Nicely done.

  • Themax on Nov 4, 2009

    Great poet thanks for sharing !!!!
    :)

  • Darla Cooke on Nov 4, 2009

    Great poem!

  • LOVELYHONEY on Nov 4, 2009

    how i wish it could have

    happened to me

    and

    i had it inbetween been

  • Zappy on Nov 5, 2009

    Linda Lori
    Your story is as sweet as honey, I can smell the vanilla scent.
    Cinnamon sprinkled golden thoughts reflecting the writer in you!

    Zappy

  • Hollywood James on Nov 5, 2009

    Great poem!!! I like the ending…but c’mon…don’t stop there!!! Elaborate…Elaborate :)

  • abhishek40914 on Nov 10, 2009

    really good

  • Craigz on Nov 13, 2009

    very good!

  • Teves on Nov 15, 2009

    Great piece of work…

  • cutedrishti8 on Nov 16, 2009

    Loved reading this….

  • Glynis Smy on Nov 28, 2009

    A very sensual piece of work, I enjoyed this.

  • Stan Wilson on Dec 4, 2009

    This is awesome,please don’t you ever stop writing, liked it very much as one could use their imagination and be transformed into the setting.Excellent well done….

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