About a girl’s love of a US Navy sailor.

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  • cardy on Feb 2, 2009

    Oh I loved this bit with the wedding ring so lovely thank’s for this.

  • L. Dalton on Feb 2, 2009

    Beautiful story and well written.

  • Lee Altman on Feb 2, 2009

    Loved the sory and the pic

  • gianne on Feb 2, 2009

    This touched me…all of it. A story of beautiful love. Not just the sailor and the woman. The mother/daughter relationship is special too.

  • Suppee XX on Feb 2, 2009

    This makes feel feel very emotional

  • Riley Themend on Feb 2, 2009

    This is brilliant. I love story telling poems and I especially love how you slowly bring out the facts of the girl and her life.

  • C Jordan on Feb 2, 2009

    A wonderful poem.Ireally enjoyed reading it.

  • Bo Russo on Feb 2, 2009

    Loved it,brought a tear to my eye.

  • Jenny Heart on Feb 4, 2009

    This is a very free flowing emotional poem that makes me want to stand up and salute. Very good!

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