Salt drops of love.

The wind ruffles the hair
silk threads rebels
while the eyes
will quench
sparkling blue.

Happy flying hours
between salty kisses
smiles bloom
spring and cuddles.

Happy Children
shots with joyful
stop the moment
and play
sand
to write “I love you.”

The afternoon takes leave
comes
sudden
evening
Miss moody
but in the hearts
shine on the weather.

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  • ShadowPsychos on Jun 1, 2010

    good one…esp like the first few lines :)

  • LOVELYHONEY on Jun 1, 2010

    shadows and i r u fans
    she deserves kudos more
    thanks
    the poet friend is from south asia
    a very parexcellent poet WAPI
    u must read him
    a loneliest poet HE

  • VTech on Jun 1, 2010

    Good Post

  • bestone on Jun 2, 2010

    Please write your ideas and writing style would be advantageous Must Continue.

  • Jimmy Shilaho on Jun 2, 2010

    You have the talent my friend.

  • giftarist on Jun 2, 2010

    This is interesting.

  • sara20 on Jun 7, 2010

    interesting piece.

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