Samurai’s Pen

touchmenot on Jan 21, 2012

Tags: samurai

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Samurai pen.

Samurai’s Pen

by: Rizalito S. Rodrigo

Where do i begin

To write poem buried within

wish i had my pen

Better put an end

To stop thinking and thinking

Not wish pen again

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PHILLY DREAMER on Jan 21, 2012
Nice. I like the double meaning of pen in this one. First as an instrument to create and last an instrument to destroy.
touchmenot on Jan 21, 2012
dual motive.. of a pen:
1st to write, using a pen
then 2nd Pen as samurai…or simply HARAKIRI
I SHOULD HAVE WRITE A SUB-TITLE HARAKIRI..
touchmenot on Jan 21, 2012
Actually the line “Better to put an end”

it can be to end or stop writing or it can be put an end to one’s life
depending on the mood or understanding of the reader..
GOT IT??
Kristie Claar on Jan 23, 2012
good work
sheilanewton on Jan 23, 2012
A most unusual theme for your Samurai challenge. Interesting…
Angelji on Jan 25, 2012
Very deep writer !
touchmenot on Jan 25, 2012
WHEW! THANKS!

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