An exalting moment where a woman plays with her child.

There off in the distance, my eyes catch sight of something i call amazing.

A mother playing with her child in a sandbox.

I stare in awe for sometime. When she finally realizes she is being watched her eyes meet mine

with the intensity of a one-thousand volt shock.
The beauty she exudes is so compelling that i am almost ashamed to be watching her.

A mother with child in such an intimate moment is almost too much to experience.

I begin to look away, but she starts making her way over to me. I pretend i am involved with the table i am sitting at.

Her infallible beauty yanks me back to meet her approaching stare.

We stare so intently into each others eyes, i feel as if our souls have melded into one.

Then i blink and she is gone….

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  • phil fletcher on May 24, 2009

    Believe me James, they’re as much flesh and blood as you and me are, and beware, the female is deadlier than the male; they’ll take you to the cleaners and make you pay the bill. Every one should fall in love once, to know what it feels like to get burned! Sorry to be such a negative force but someone’s got to burst your bubble before it’s too late.

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