Sands (Haiku)

Priyanka Bhowmick on Jul 22, 2010

Tags: child, footprints, footsteps, Haiku, poem, Poetry, Sands, sea, seashore

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A haiku.

sands by the sea

revealing tiny footprints

as the child steps

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Comments (9)

PARAM on Jul 22, 2010
nice one..
Vivek Ratan on Jul 22, 2010
A smile for your words.
RAJEEV BHARGAVA on Jul 22, 2010
i love this poem alot. the photograph of the footsteps trailing from sand to sea add to the atmosphere. simply beauitful.
drishti8 on Jul 22, 2010
Wonderful write.
colinpoetry on Jul 22, 2010
perfect imagery, very soothing
Goodselfme on Jul 22, 2010
Said as if you knew the activity so well. Gentle and purposeful prose. Thank you.
Sourav on Jul 23, 2010
Well said and written!
Steven West on Jul 24, 2010
Wonderfully written. Liked the message.
CREED SS on Jul 29, 2010
i think it\’s not up to the mark……learn then show…. looks like a layman\’s work..

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