No melody yet but im working on it.

I’m watching , and waiting

You talk to her, like best friends

Do you remember my name

We’re best friend in fifth grade

You gave gifts and I gave 

Friendship beyond belief

And what I held inside

Was so close to tears

Im sitting on sandy shores 

Watching the waves roll by

Inherit the water

Learn to read the sea 

Your selfishness is proved

Im winning and you lose 

Expressions im unable to read

They all come 

I sit there

My green eyes my brown hair

Wishing we were close as we once were

And what I held inside was so close to tears

Im sitting on sandy shores 

Watching the waves roll by

Inherit the water

Learn to read the sea 

Inherit the water

Learn to read the sea .

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  • Adam Henry Sears on Apr 12, 2010

    Hi, emmy.

    I like the flow for the most part. Maybe when you have the tune worked out, you could share it. Sounds like good lyrics. Btw – instead of proved, could the word be proven?

    Thanks for sharing and have a good day.

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