Sane Advice A young man just out of his teens yearns for a lover and wife.


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Sane Advice

Ur write up is the best one

I’ve read in years

And hope when u get married

 U gets the girl of Ur mental creation

 

I wonder if one such perfect one

Has ever been born

But one advice

Love and live a wholesome life

Be faithful to Ur one and only wife

 

If u cheat her

She will u beat?

And in Ur heat

 There’s bound to be retreat.

So take care

Beware

Sex is needed after love

And before

As u by know it

Of that I’m sure.


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  • Jimmy Shilaho on Mar 28, 2010

    Nice.

  • johnnydod on Mar 29, 2010

    good one LH

  • Lavia on Mar 29, 2010

    I love it!!!

  • Darla Cooke on Mar 29, 2010

    Very nice poem.

  • wonder on Mar 29, 2010

    Yes I\’m into the flow of the poem.

  • Judy Kaelin on Mar 29, 2010

    I really liked your selection of photos, beautiful ..

  • qasimdharamsy on Mar 29, 2010

    very nice one….

  • maeraquel on Apr 1, 2010

    u like poems don’t you?
    Ü

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