To be so close that you hate being apart is us.

She said I’m the problem

 and the solution

In me she finds a good thing

So I give because she likes to

receive and if I hold back

a little she always wants more.

She used to fake it

until my persistence

made the act feel so real

her body released

the impossibilities of her mind

and made her sensibilities

sound like Harry meeting Sally

all over again. 

We’ve become so connected

that whenever we’re apart

our souls feel neglected.

If I am the solution

to her problem,

then it is inevitable 

that she’ll be satisfied

by any answer that I provide.

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  • Linda Lori on Jun 22, 2011

    Wow! Love this one! :)

  • isloooboy on Jun 22, 2011

    So lovely, show your love for her and yes she will be satisfied one day :) nice written good work

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