Save Me … I Am Falling…..lol

girishpuri on Jan 10, 2012

Tags: blood, spider

Is there is any one who can save me?

I am falling through the ice and i am not being able to find my way out ,

Huge spider jumping on me ,I can’t help they scare the wits out ,

I am stuck in a coffin like box , and i can’t move , terrifying ,

I am in line to jump out of an aeroplane for parachuting ,

I am locked in a dark room and it is full of snakes and bugs ,

I am falling down from a high rise building and it’s really scary ,

I am getting mugged and not being able to breathe and sinking to the bottom ,

I am driving on a bridge and my car is going to fall apart ,

I am scared i will lose my parents and pets , which mean a lot to me ,

I have to appear in a exam and i not prepared for it ,

Can any body save me ?

Can any body stop my scary dreams ?

My all dreams are very scary , terrifying and real horrible one ,

Can anybody explain ? why they come ?

They only come to me or it comes to all ?

Am i escaping from life ?

Am i avoiding some thing ,

Am i a weak person ?

I don’t have any irrational fear ,

All mine are very real…..lol

What about you ?

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CHIPMUNK on Jan 10, 2012
Awesome write
Ixodoi on Jan 10, 2012
I could almost smell fear while reading it. You are very talented.
rubysexy on Jan 10, 2012
Nice poem.
Dee Gold on Jan 10, 2012
thanks for shring this nice piece
Dee Gold on Jan 10, 2012
oops, sorry for the typo of the word sharing
ozicha on Jan 10, 2012
nice share
ittech on Jan 10, 2012
Very nice lovely write.
prsol46 on Jan 10, 2012
Wow, sounds like a nightmare! Good work, keep it up!
Moses Ingram on Jan 10, 2012
Fear, our number one enemy. Good share.
iva75cpb on Jan 10, 2012
Terrible nightmare.
PHILLY DREAMER on Jan 10, 2012
You have to learn to control your dreams, then instead of nightmares you will have amazing adventures
aheed411 on Jan 10, 2012
Wow
DR.VNS on Jan 10, 2012
Well written.
erwinkennythomas on Jan 10, 2012
amazing
FX777222999 on Jan 10, 2012
Scary and with fear all over.
LoveDoctor on Jan 10, 2012
Lol. I was about to ask you if this was true, but then you said it. I really enjoyed this piece. Good work.
LCM Linda on Jan 10, 2012
I can’t remember my dreams most of the time. What left behind is an unpleasant feeling that I have to get a nice cup of coffee to calm down and feel better..
LCM Linda on Jan 10, 2012
I can’t remember my dreams most of the time. What left behind is an unpleasant feeling that I have to get a nice cup of coffee to calm down and feel better.
Eunike on Jan 10, 2012
I think I am really in trouble as I lost my old Triond account
indianwriting on Jan 11, 2012
I don’t remember the last time I dreamt while asleep…but i more than make up by dreaming with eyes wide open
Jay F. Samson on Jan 11, 2012
Awesome!
CutezSoNia on Jan 11, 2012
Well written.
ittech on Jan 11, 2012
I am dropping finished the upper and i am not existence competent to brainwave my way of life out ,
realityspeaks on Jan 11, 2012
Beautiful…
gaby7 on Jan 11, 2012
Liked this!
mdrkarim7 on Jan 12, 2012
I don’t have any irrational fear ,

All mine are very real…..lol

What about you ?

I’m fine and
flying high!

Nice poem!
papaleng on Jan 12, 2012
good read, Fear and Anger are two things one must conquer.
girishpuri on Jan 12, 2012
thanks
ittech on Jan 12, 2012
interesting post
sanataryal on Jan 12, 2012
Girish , very creative writing . U rock .
megamatt09 on Jan 12, 2012
So much to think about.
yes me on Jan 12, 2012
Try reading the Beano, before you go to bed cheers
Kristie Claar on Jan 12, 2012
great share
kalule Arthur on Jan 14, 2012
wow, very creative
krrymarie on Jan 14, 2012
wow great worked loved it.
Angelji on Jan 15, 2012
i have a lots of it..
girishpuri on Jan 15, 2012
thanks to all
ittech on Jan 16, 2012
Good to learn about it.
nurzaira on Jan 17, 2012
oala.. it’s sound like nightmare
ogee77 on Jan 18, 2012
Very nice share! Keep it up!
Muzammil196 on Jan 20, 2012
Nice content

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