A poem about trust and love.

So many things you need to say, but keep it all inside.

I see the love, the questions, the pain when I look into your eyes.

You keep your heart protected, so you don’t get hurt again.

I know one day when trust is built, you will slowly let me in.

To share your life, your hopes, your dreams, the things you truly need.

To heal your wounds to help you out, for you to really see.

That I love you more than anything, to you I’d give the world.

You are just what I’ve been looking for and I’ll forever be your girl!

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  • VisionsToPonder on Dec 30, 2011

    This was a good poem. I got good vibes and emotions behind it. But I do think it could have been ended better. The last line kind of threw the rest of the poem out of balance in a way, but other than that Iit was good.

  • stephaniemorris26 on Dec 30, 2011

    @ VisionsToPonder thank you very much for your comment and i appreciate the feedback

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