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Listen here

Don’t just tell me what to do

Ask me nicely

What the hell is wrong with you

Talking to me

like I’m worth nothing

and acting like

you own me or something

Where’s your manners

Show me some respect

I’m not your child

and I damn sure ain’t your pet

If you need me to do something for you,

there’s a much better way

to make that happen

Please is what you say

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Comments (4)
  • Dena McCusker on Aug 31, 2009

    i really liked the flow to this. good piece.

  • wolffe on Aug 31, 2009

    Sometimes it is best to remain still in the storm but using manners in the face of society is a recommended action. Good word usage, the flow works well with the emotional contrast.

  • chantell on Aug 31, 2009

    I like it. Please keep writing. I feel You.

  • alc on Sep 1, 2009

    You words can speak to so many! Thanks for the share!

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