Scar

ladydryle on Dec 9, 2009

A wound heals as the time passes by but it leaves a scar,which reminds you that once upon a time, you’ve been hurt..

He was there one night

when I met some eyes so bright

and suddenly takes a flight

to someone whom I gave my first sight.

I dream of him every night

I think of him every night

And when the sun shine so bright

I always take a glimpse when his out of sight.

And when that day he begun to smile back

the moment I thought is the beginning of my luck

is the beginning of a tragedy

who ruined some things unexpectedly.

I wish I never met his eyes

I wish I never knew his existence

for when he came into my life

He comes out leaving a scar in my heart.

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Comments (10)

Christine Ramsay on Dec 9, 2009
It is such a shame you were hurt, but we learn through experiences like that and can avoid making the same mistakes again. Nice work.

Christine
AlmaG on Dec 9, 2009
Everyone goes through that pain but survives and become a stronger and better person.
LOVELYHONEY on Dec 9, 2009
You read me and I read you

that’s what all Triondites do

thank you

you are gr88888888888

lovely honey
PhoenixRox on Dec 11, 2009
for when he came into my life,He comes out leaving a scar in my heart.- These are such powerful lines.This pain will make us stronger, but the scar remains. I loved the poem.
Starpisces on Dec 11, 2009
Nice poem, very well expressed. Hope time can heal the pain, and the scar will disappear gradually…
jaysonv on Dec 12, 2009
oh this is painful…but you are right time can heal…well the scar will remind you that you were once hurt but eventually it makes you stronger than before…
Tom Silex on Dec 16, 2009
ouch! who hurt you? who hurt you… who hurt you… who hurt you???
ladydryle on Dec 18, 2009
You can only be hurt by someone close to you and is special too….
jaysonv on Dec 18, 2009
nice piece..
SharifaMcFarlane on Dec 19, 2009
I think we can all relate. Let your heart heal.

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