My shoes filled with holes and no jacket to wear, looking around the world seems not to care.

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Scared and alone with no place to go,

Trying to keep warm from the fall of the snow.

My tummy how it rumbles as I have nothing to eat,

finding a snack in the trash was a treat.

My shoes filled with holes and no jacket to wear,

looking around the world seems not to care.

Job it was lost just a short time back,

it all fell apart in one small great crack.

I have gone to all places but no help is there,

how did this happen with no one to care.

I am lost and alone without a solution,

so on the streets I will live with all the pollution.

If only things were like they used to be,

holding onto that job that was really the key.

No education strong enough to keep me afloat,

but time don’t go backwards I can just write in this note.

I wish so much I had some place to go,

and end this nightmare so that I could grow.

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Comments (14)
  • Darla Cooke on Nov 3, 2009

    Very interesting poem.

  • Will Gray on Nov 3, 2009

    Great poem. I hope this is not about you!

  • ken bultman on Nov 3, 2009

    That’s a sad poem and I expect many people are reciting it.

  • lindalulu on Nov 3, 2009

    @ Will not it is not about me, its about people in general…

  • Diverseblogger on Nov 3, 2009

    Lovely poem. Very sad but enjoyable :) thanks for sharng

  • CHAN LEE PENG on Nov 4, 2009

    Very sad though! I hope the said person in this poem feels better now. Thanks!

  • Petalm on Nov 4, 2009

    Best I’ve read today.

  • Jane Jane on Nov 4, 2009

    full of emotions. poignant piece.

  • STEVE666 on Nov 4, 2009

    A sign of the times, in this boom and bust society we live.
    Well written, BTW.

  • Faith Hodge on Nov 4, 2009

    Well presented, Linda thank you for sharing.

  • xoxo on Nov 6, 2009

    Nice write. Thank you.

  • CutestPrincess on Nov 20, 2009

    Your wording was well thought out and had a wonderful flow!

  • Sandra Lee on May 19, 2011

    How beautifully written, and how sad that there are actually people out there that way.

  • Sandra Lee on May 19, 2011

    How beautifully written, and how sad that there are actually people out there that way.

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