Dedicated to fellow travellers, who have been damaged, yet show such dignity in suffering – you have my deepest respect.

Ravages of brutal battles fought

now manifest on visage pale.

Furrowed brow as plowed field,

Sunken cheeks like craters

left by Exocet missile

~~~

Wounds deeply etched

in turbulent memory,

lacerations in fragile mind,

as blood-red ribbons blown

by unrelenting breeze

~~~

Self-image shattered into

a million fragments, by

heartless words and deeds,

as a mirror trampled

beneath jack-boots

~~~

Jagged shards which

endlessly pierce through

levels of consciousness

dispensing their pain

at a moments notice

~~~

Marks now bravely worn

with supreme dignity.

In magnificent resilience

pressing ever onward

towards a brighter day.

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Comments (6)
  • CHIPMUNK on Nov 9, 2011

    Wow!! So well expressed

  • ensemble5 on Nov 9, 2011

    Vos images sont vraiment fortes,dérangent.
    bien écrie. Alec …

  • carmen on Nov 9, 2011

    A sad poem with a lot of suffering and bad memories, scars that remain forever. To all those that this poem is dedicated to, may the Lord give them the healing that they need.

  • lovinglyoursjuny on Nov 9, 2011

    So emotional and well expressed (thumbs up)

  • Jonie on Nov 9, 2011

    Thanks Alec.
    My heart and prayers go out to all those so badly scarred. Only our Lord can wipe away the tears and give beauty for ashes.

  • Neva Flores on Nov 11, 2011

    beautifullly expressed.

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