A poem with haiku verses.

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I took a long drive

Through the scenic countryside

Here in the mountains

 

I viewed the Fall leaves

Bright and beautiful colors

Red, yellow and gold

 

I stopped by a lake

With clear sparkling water

Ducks swam slowly by

 

I had a picnic

Out in a lush green meadow

Birds chirped merrily

 

I spent a grand day

Savoring Autumn’s beauty

That nature provides

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  • Teves on Nov 7, 2009

    Wow nice poem. Nice photo too.

  • shanthu on Nov 7, 2009

    great article darla…….im the first to comment on it……hey hey thanks

  • Teves on Nov 7, 2009

    Wow nice poem. I like the photo too…

  • Starpisces on Nov 7, 2009

    beautiful poem, come with beautiful scenery, perfect! Wish I were there…

  • TroostAvenue on Nov 7, 2009

    You do have nice thoughts. Thanks again.

  • Milton H Peebles III on Nov 7, 2009

    Pretty
    Take Care, DreamSweet and let Your Heart Shine
    ~ milty

  • johnnydod on Nov 7, 2009

    what a nice picture you pain with your words

  • Petalm on Nov 7, 2009

    Good visualization.

  • K.Reshma on Nov 7, 2009

    Very nice poem

  • Themax on Nov 7, 2009

    I can feel the side seen through your article,Thanks for sharing :)

  • Christine Ramsay on Nov 7, 2009

    That is a beautiful and cleverly written poem. it is not easy to do it all in haikus. Well done.

    Christine

  • Sourav on Nov 7, 2009

    Very beautifully written poem.

  • abhishek40914 on Nov 7, 2009

    nice article

  • deep blue on Nov 7, 2009

    A mesmerizing thoughts of the great outdoors. Lovely lines.

  • Goodselfme on Nov 7, 2009

    Well done with words and pics

  • Annashank on Nov 8, 2009

    Lovely piccys and words :)

  • STEVE666 on Nov 9, 2009

    Brilliant!

  • CutestPrincess on Nov 28, 2009

    very creative piece…

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