A poem about my long suffering Sciatica, I was wondering what subject to use for my poem and with another sharp stabbing pain it came to me "ouch"

Lying here in severe pain

From long tem sciatica

Appointment waiting in vain

Cant get here any quicker

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Suffering nine month and more

Lying flat to ease the pain

How comfortable is that floor

Simply driving me insane

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Doctor fills me full of pills

To make my life easier to bare

Stopping the yelps and shrills

Now I’m high and I don’t care

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One month to my operation

To have a lumber laminectomy

Waiting is like slow motion

To have long awaited surgery

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  • corecz on Feb 5, 2011

    really great poem

  • tiffi on Feb 6, 2011

    Very nice poem! Good job!

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