Of moods, choices, feelings.

Why does a Cimmerian night
Gather in the mouth?
Why are there so many places
That are interchangeable, and why
Do days merge?

I have to talk about rivers
That defeat themselves
By keeping alive.
I only know about objects
That birds lose, but
I can talk for days
About mundane tools with bitterness.

What we have today
Are not memories -
They are faces with tears,
Throats with bruises,
Anything that drops from
Wet autumn leaves.

We hold onto days
As if they nourished
Feeding them with our own blood.

Scattered fragments
On scraps of paper,
Words that might have meaning
If anything did
Scuttle across dusty floors
Until they get pinned
Into poetry.

Sometimes we put up walls
Not to keep others out
But to see who cares enough
To force their way in.

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  • sara2010 on Mar 3, 2010

    Nice one

  • ujwal28 on Mar 3, 2010

    Nice poetry.

  • Brenda Nelson on Mar 3, 2010

    I love the last bit about the walls. In my life few people bother to push their way in.. most are too focused on themselves and although they might pretend to care, few really do.

  • Kate Smedley on Mar 3, 2010

    Very interesting and original poem, I also love the last stanza…

  • 8Shei8 on Mar 3, 2010

    I agree with B Nelson. The ending struck a cord in my heart. Beautiful write as always.

  • AlmaG on Mar 3, 2010

    I would agree with the ending. Only those people who cares can break that wall.

  • Joie Schmidt on Mar 4, 2010

    Strong work.

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Liane Schmidt.

  • papaleng on Mar 4, 2010

    well-written powerful piece.

  • albert1jemi on Mar 8, 2010

    good poem

  • Blue Roses on Sep 24, 2010

    “Sometimes we put up walls
    Not to keep others out
    But to see who cares enough
    To force their way in.”

    It’s hard to tell the difference sometimes…

    The soul selects its own society…then shuts the door. ED

    Well done, Christopher.

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