A poem about when people a third party attacks victims of manipulations and backstabbing simply for feeling hurt by or getting angery at the original attacker. This happens quite frequently in work places, schools, bars, chat rooms, and even within families. Stop it. Put the original attacker in their place, not the victim. Then maybe we can all get on to having a charmed life.

A shark attacks,

I say “ouch that hurts”,

and

“I don’t want that to happen again”,

the shark gets off scott free,

but, not me.

Stop it,

Stop it,

Stop it.

This shark is not acting on instinct,

this shark is not a creature of habit,

this shark is not a shark.

This shark is a metaphor,

a human who can not act humane.

So many sharks, always circling,

attacking,

trying to cause discourse.

Let me have my scream.

Let me vocalize my pain.

Gag the sharks instead of me.

Pain held inside festers and evolves

into puss filled infections.

Letting them out lets you evolve

into the charming author of a charmed life.

Let me… Please.

Tiger Shark! by miusam-ck.

Photo Source: http://www.flickr.com/photos/miusam/466952794/

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  • cafftee on Aug 2, 2009

    Interesting poem. A lesson here for the forum too maybe?

  • Deep Blue on Aug 2, 2009

    The worst thing that could happen. Being the fall guy. Nice poem.

  • mdartist on Aug 2, 2009

    Very good and very true! Wish my attacker could understand this!

  • Lostash on Aug 2, 2009

    Unfortunately, these types of sharks are not endangered!

  • Angela DiAngelo on Aug 2, 2009

    Well described within your words.

  • Duff D Moss on Aug 2, 2009

    I agree – very applicable to the forums at the moment. A hard biting piece indeed. Thanks for contributing to the challenge again.

  • Darla Cooke on Aug 5, 2009

    Very well written and interesting.

  • oldster on Aug 5, 2009

    Wouldn’t want that metaphor in my bath tub.Good poem.

  • Katie Marie on Aug 5, 2009

    Creative use of the words.

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