Screams

Darla Cooke on Jul 11, 2009

Tags: chills, movement, scared, screams, shadows

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Feeling scared.

I hear screams in the shadows.

I see movement with my eyes.

Chills are coursing down my spine.

The hairs on my neck begin to rise.

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Comments (10)

Nikita K on Jul 11, 2009
I do like this poem very much indeed. I am a massive fan of short poems of about one or two stanzas which cover a message beautifully. Wonderful job there, Darla!
alc on Jul 11, 2009
you can see every detail in just a few words!!! Great job!
ken bultman on Jul 11, 2009
Good scary shorty.
sheba on Jul 11, 2009
Short and to the point. That was a good read. Thanks for sharing!
Tanya Wallace on Jul 11, 2009
Straight to the point,excellent work Darla,great subject,very creative.
livemike on Jul 11, 2009
like this one…
OhSugar on Jul 11, 2009
Runnnnnnnnnn!!!!!!!!! Awww, it was just your cat:-)Very nice.
rajeev bhargava on Jul 11, 2009
a very atmospheric poem, short and full of suspence. i enjoyed it.
Sonia Doreen on Jul 13, 2009
Darla, this is so well said!
CutestPrincess on Jul 31, 2009
I truly enjoyed reading this!

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