Quiet as a mouse. Take a closer look, you may just see a child with that look. Silent screaming are loud, we just need to get our heads out of the clouds.

My head is down I make not a sound, ’cause my daddy knows how to pound.  My back is sore, my walk is slower, I could hardly get off the floor.  The color red trickles from my head, it looks the same as what’s on my bed. The color blue, you have no clue, is under my shirt, and it hurts.  My daddy is clever like a devil, never would I lie.  He has two faces that he aces, one for you and one for me, I am sure there are many more cases. You see me everyday, then you look the other way without saying, hey.  Am I invisible?  Don’t you see this child?  Me.  I need your help, I’m full of welps and so unkept.   How long it has since I slept?  My head is down, so are my pounds, but I am still to scare to make a sound.  Is anybody listening?

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Comments (10)
  • Uva Sims on Dec 15, 2008

    There are so many children out there just screaming for help and we look the other way. Keep writing about them, will? I like it very much.

  • Ellie on Jan 10, 2009

    Amayzing. Your truly a fantastic writer

  • TammieSue on Jan 12, 2009

    It is sad, how many children are walking around us with pain in their heart and sometime physical too, and we don\’t see it, or we don’t want to see it.

  • Paul on Jan 22, 2009

    Unfortunately, this is a true article. Nicely written.

  • Terry Lyle on Jan 27, 2009

    That’s painful, but true…I will fight for any child that has been abused, let me see one clue then I become the avenger…It needs to be stopped Today!!!!, We all need to speak up.

  • shatti on Feb 19, 2009

    What a lonely sad children,who just need someone who wants to help him, to see him. Powerful piece.

  • SpaceCadet on Mar 10, 2009

    Sugar, I noticed that you write a lot about our children and how they are treated and how they should be treated. Your love for them is clear. I like all your work.

  • lisaT on Mar 17, 2009

    Nice article, but too sad for words.

  • pushing 40 on Mar 20, 2009

    Hurting any child, mentally, physically,spiritually or any other way is unconscionable. Abusers, will get their just rewards.

  • SlimJim on May 28, 2009

    This an unfortunate situation in many children’s life. I like the way you put this together. Thank you for caring about our youth and may God bless you.

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