First composition from the first heartache.

i could still remember what we have before
you reminded me of a love i knew
you came and change something within,
i know by then i wanna be with you,
to be the one who’s in your arms.
we make ourselves laugh in small things
i got excited every time i’m going to see you.

never had i spoken so freely,
so comfortably with someone.
the smell of your scent,
the sound of your voice
painted in my memories,
you gave me faith to find my dreams.

all these words make no sense
i find bliss in ignorance.
i thought you were just the best i ever had
but i just end up getting hurt again.

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  • JPSO on Aug 17, 2008

    It seem that your getting the hang of it my friend. I can see that you are speaking from the heart. Great job.

  • No Share on Apr 24, 2011

    first love, first heartaches, first of everything are one the most intense memory of things that we can have. It lasts longer than usual because we let it so.

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