My fervent attempt to become an artist in the beginning.

Kudos to my knowledge in geography!

Though some got evaporated

And added to the water cycle,

Some did get accumulated.

 Moreover, I suffer,

From a chronic brainwave,

This keeps me from being a tad naïve

Now I can confidently answer you

What causes a sea wave?

 

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  • ken bultman on Oct 28, 2009

    Now we know that waves are created by sea horses playing skip rope. Beautiful marine creations. Don’t ever put the brushes down.

  • K.Reshma on Oct 28, 2009

    Great job, keep it up

  • Jane Jane on Oct 28, 2009

    fun read. another great piece of art.

  • CA Johnson on Oct 28, 2009

    I loved the pictures and the poem. You are really talented.

  • Frances Lawrence on Oct 28, 2009

    The pictures are great and your writing is fun, well done.

  • martinpm on Oct 28, 2009

    your painting are really good, liked your poem as always.

  • Eunice Tan on Oct 28, 2009

    Superb. Great picture & poem

  • neet on Oct 29, 2009

    You are a real talent………you do well both as an artist or as a writer.

  • Starpisces on Oct 29, 2009

    unique poem and great painting, wonderful

  • wcmonro on Oct 29, 2009

    Beautiful painting and writing. Thank you.

  • Annashank on Oct 30, 2009

    Nice one!!! Do check my latest addition out:-)

  • cynthiac on Oct 30, 2009

    nice painting! cute writing!

  • Teves on Nov 5, 2009

    Well done…

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