A reminder that even the hardest shell cannot protect a shellfish forever.

Randomly scattered

jewels, thrown up from the sea,

protecting no more.

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  • T. S. Lewis on Dec 29, 2009

    My how they long for the inside. Very nice.

  • Lady Sunshine on Dec 29, 2009

    A lovely way of putting it.

  • diamondpoet on Dec 29, 2009

    Great piece, and nicely put.

  • ken bultman on Dec 29, 2009

    Never thought of it that way.

  • devsir on Dec 29, 2009

    Short but meaningful. Great.

  • magicdarts on Dec 29, 2009

    makes me think of the struggle to let go as you let the kids leave the nest – great work

  • Faith Hodge on Dec 29, 2009

    This is very good. My senses became inspired as I read this. Thanks for sharing. TU

  • Goodselfme on Dec 29, 2009

    WEll done! TX

  • Karen Gross on Dec 29, 2009

    Made me feel kind of sad :`(

  • AlmaG on Dec 29, 2009

    I visualize a strong person on the outside but very fragile on the inside. Great haiku!

  • Frances Lawrence on Dec 29, 2009

    A lovely poem, my daughters loved collecting shells when they were younger.

  • PhoenixRox on Dec 30, 2009

    This one has so many layers. Is it meant to be just about the sea-shells? I think not. In any case, a real treat.

  • Joie Schmidt on Dec 30, 2009

    *:) Nice.

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Liane Schmidt.

  • metro7 on Dec 30, 2009

    yes some men are tough from outside but very tender from inside like coconut,sea shells or turtles.nice poem.thxs.

  • nightcharmer on Dec 30, 2009

    Very nice haiku, though rather sad. And what a strong visual imagery conjured but in a few words! Good write indeed.

  • Seth Frederiksen on Dec 30, 2009

    Very nice, an excellent piece of poetry.

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