How tidal movements can “reflect” my emotional highs & lows.

Now…

Boisterous billows

Crashing ‘gainst

coastal defences

Uncompromisingly angry

Terrifying

~~~

Then…

Gentle waves

Calmly caressing

responsive shore-line

Unquestioningly peaceful

Soothing

Ebb & flow

To & fro:

Mirror of the heart

Complex & changeable

Driven & demanding

~~~

I can but stare,

As mesmerised

I see myself

There.

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  • Debra. on Nov 4, 2009

    Lovely wording and, the title is so fitting with the poem and the pictures. Nicely done, Alec (Ralph)!

  • Jonie on Nov 4, 2009

    I really like this!
    Well done!

  • Moira on Nov 4, 2009

    Wonderful piece Alec…The words and images fit so well together…Thank you for sharing this..as usual it’s a pleasure to see your work…Truly a God given talent…Moira

  • raman13 on Nov 4, 2009

    excellent

  • ken bultman on Nov 4, 2009

    Come and go…the surf and you…both good.

  • Annamaria( bluesemotion) on Nov 4, 2009

    Wonderful piece Alec…The thoughts and images match so well together…Thank you for sharing this.work.,which I ‘ve enjoyed a lot

  • Ingrid on Nov 4, 2009

    So well said!! Thank you, Alec :-)

  • Darla Smith on Nov 4, 2009

    Lovely poem!

  • Deb on Nov 4, 2009

    Thoughtful words … I can somehow relate. Nice images, too. Just lovely. Thank you for sharing.

  • katie marie on Nov 4, 2009

    Yes, I too have often seen myself in the waves.

  • Judi on Nov 4, 2009

    Good work, Alec, thanks. :)

  • Sourav on Nov 4, 2009

    Wondefully written, you’ve played with the words nicely!

  • Casey Mack on Nov 4, 2009

    Mmm, there is serenity even in the turbulent places of this. A lovely read, Alec.

  • Bhanu on Nov 4, 2009

    It’s so nice, i wanna post it in my blog!:))

  • Fernando on Nov 4, 2009

    The words paint wonderfully the waves of our soul. :)

  • maranatha on Nov 4, 2009

    Yes, that’s how I see the ocean too. It is captivating and introspective. Thanks for this. I get to the coast so rarely, but I can still hear the waves in my heart.

  • Barbara on Nov 4, 2009

    Great poem, Alec! I love the images! Perfect!

  • Lostash on Nov 4, 2009

    Very nice indeed!

  • kate smedley on Nov 5, 2009

    I totally understand where you are coming from with this Alec, lovely poem with imagery that fits the mood perfectly.

  • papaleng on Nov 5, 2009

    Love this man, very beautiful imagery!

  • Roberta J. Morrison on Nov 6, 2009

    The ocean is a fascinating…mysterious…everychanging…and so are we. Lovely poem, Alec.

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