Trying to find that special someone.

Everywhere I looked you were there.
I felt you here just yesterday
when I closed my eyes.
Once I opened them again,
you were gone.
Frantically I searched,
praying you were okay.
Each moment that past
felt longer than the one before.
Hopelessness, loss, emptiness,
nothing held any meaning.
Confusion was all that was left.
The fog lifted, I realized where you were.
This whole time you were there,
you never left, you held me in your hands…
For you are me.

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  • Josey on Apr 1, 2008

    You have great imagery here. Nice job.

  • nobert soloria bermosa on Apr 3, 2008

    nice piece, i enjoyed reading it…

  • Richard on Apr 29, 2009

    A good twist on it, I’ve lost myself too many times.

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