Seas!

Kate34 on Dec 10, 2010

Tags: Breeze, calmly, cold, misty, sail, seashells, view, whales

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Sea life!

Rainy, dead seas roughly desire a old, misty wave.

Sunny, clear seashells quietly desire a misty, rough sun.

Sail calmly like a big breeze.

All whales view cold, clear breezes.

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Comments (8)

Karen Gross on Dec 10, 2010
Nice poem. You put some creative phrases together, “Rainy, dead seas” and “Sunny, clear seashells”.Very interesting descriptions.
roaringlion on Dec 11, 2010
Nice work..
Kate34 on Dec 11, 2010
Thanks you!
gb1269 on Dec 11, 2010
Nice 30 words full of life poem.
mostpopulararticle on Dec 12, 2010
I love the sea!
Kate34 on Dec 12, 2010
Thank you!
Lady Bumblebee on Dec 12, 2010
Lovely poem I enjoyed reading it
Allison Jae on Dec 16, 2010
Nicely painted pictures of words. Makes me think I’m on the beach right now.

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