Thoughts walking along Myrtle Beach.

Waves wash upon the shore

     breaking shells into sand

Incoming waves tumble a top

undertow

           sounds of rushing air

 

Sand conforms under stationary

footprints. The tide swirls,

     as tiny clams burrow

in cemented sand.

 

The vastness of the ocean

     open like the horizon.

What power draws us

           near water’s edge?

 

Docks appear close,

     a day could be wasted

walking pier to pier

 

The ocean churns time

  Each hour adds clutter to 

simple landscapes.

 

A fisherman disrupting 

     with line and hook.

Children unknowingly play as

     their innocence slips away.

A seeker of treasure 

     follows technology’s beep

another searches for a 

            seashell intact.

 

Wrinkled skin and salt blinded eyes

     means ocean side activity

will subside

          raising romantic tides

 

Moon beams glisten off

     the suds of black tides

and lovers claim 

   secluded property

 

Night and day

    beach incursions

turn seashells to sand.

 

 

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Comments (7)
  • Snooky on Jul 13, 2010

    Looks like a nice day at the beach watching daily dramas unfold.

  • Starpisces on Jul 13, 2010

    lovely poem.. I feel like going to the beach now.
    ^_^

  • Christine Ramsay on Jul 14, 2010

    What wonderful images have been created through these words. Well done.

    Christine

  • giftarist on Jul 14, 2010

    Such wonderful imagery, friend.

  • alxymy on Jul 29, 2010

    I can picture it right now I am off to the beach :)

  • Lipstick on Aug 7, 2010

    i am imagining you walking by the beach and capturing everything u see and feel, into one good poetry
    i like this :)

  • S A JOHNSON on Aug 9, 2010

    It’s been so long since I’ve been to the beach.

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