(sigh) It’s that time of year, again…

First snow invades in random ranks

fat with October’s atmospheric brew,

ponderous in motion and at rest,

clings in decorative determination

to branch, leaf, and clustered needle.

 

An apologetic, temporary gift

offered to offset an early arrival,

reluctantly acknowledged from a guest

of less than certain welcome.

 

And then a disappearing act ensues

to leave an empty, longing place,

where memory of beauty overcomes

a weight of seasonal anticipation

with hints of what is yet to come.

      Casey Mack (2009)

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  • Sourav on Oct 13, 2009

    Beautiful poem. Good construction of lines.

  • stryka66 on Oct 13, 2009

    Yes, I enjoyed “clings in decorative determination” – nice description KC – excellent piece

  • cutedrishti8 on Oct 13, 2009

    great piece of write

  • raman13 on Oct 13, 2009

    excellent

  • Katie Marie on Oct 13, 2009

    I sigh with you. Winter has started much too early this year.

  • Vikram Chhabra on Oct 13, 2009

    Excellent piece. I loved the flow. It made me feel the outdoors!

  • kate smedley on Oct 14, 2009

    I love this poem but I think the last stanza is my favourite, lovely work Casey.

  • Linda Lori on Oct 22, 2009

    Love this!

  • Roberta J. Morrison on Oct 22, 2009

    Very beautiful, Casey.

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