Second Chance is a poem about seeing ourselves for who we really are and trying to help bring peace and love to a world that is so judgmental. It’s about changing yourself to help change the world.

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  • Nikikah on Oct 30, 2007

    Nice Work, I Like It!

  • Peaches on Oct 30, 2007

    Reality Check! I Like it.

  • Sandra A. Mitchell on Oct 30, 2007

    I enjoyed this poem very much it is very relevant to the times we are living in. Also a wake up call to always be thankful for our daily blessings.

  • Sandra A. Mitchell on Oct 30, 2007

    I enjoyed this poem very much it is very relevant to the times we are living in. Also a wake up call to always be thankful for our daily blessings.

  • Sandra A. Mitchell on Oct 30, 2007

    I enjoyed this poem very much it is very relevant to the times we are living in. Also a wake up call to always be thankful for our daily blessings.

  • zeedee on Oct 30, 2007

    this wasa good story on reflection.when we point a finger at someone .we have to point 3 back at ourselves.my girlfriend reminded me of this.poem well done.

  • zeedee on Oct 30, 2007

    this wasa good story on reflection.when we point a finger at someone .we have to point 3 back at ourselves.my girlfriend reminded me of this.poem well done.

  • zeedee on Oct 30, 2007

    this wasa good story on reflection.when we point a finger at someone .we have to point 3 back at ourselves.my girlfriend reminded me of this.poem well done.

  • zeedee on Oct 30, 2007

    this wasa good story on reflection.when we point a finger at someone .we have to point 3 back at ourselves.my girlfriend reminded me of this.poem well done.

  • zeedee on Oct 30, 2007

    this wasa good story on reflection.when we point a finger at someone .we have to point 3 back at ourselves.my girlfriend reminded me of this.poem well done.

  • zeedee on Oct 30, 2007

    this wasa good story on reflection.when we point a finger at someone .we have to point 3 back at ourselves.my girlfriend reminded me of this.poem well done.

  • D.J. Harold on Oct 31, 2007

    I have been there and it was not a dream, so I am thankful for every step I take now. I Like It!

  • RID PSALM10. on Nov 1, 2007

    This story apply to those of us in the diaspora.
    For people in Nigeria who do not pay Mortgage, their nightmares is and dreams ae real.
    No security, no good health services, no roads, no water, no electricity, no jobs culminating in bad financial situations, no payment of salaries and pension on time if a retired government worker, police who is supposed to protect me and safeguard me from hoodlums,I am driving back home from work and I’m stuck in a hold up but I’m scared because I can be shot and robbed among others.
    Please somebody wake me up from this weird dream of mine.

    No I am not sleeping, I am wide awake!!!!
    O lord, hve mercy.

  • Tina on Nov 10, 2008

    Spirit this is a reality, so don’t stop writing now. You are a writer of reality. Love this very much.

  • Elladine on Nov 10, 2008

    This is awesome, very thought provoking. I am left shaking my head in awe. I tried to go back in my mind, to every homeless person I had face to face contact with; I am a giver, I know that, I am just wondering if………… Well, thanks for opening up my eyes. Written words on a page means something to the reader. Thanks for sharing.

  • Jamaica on Nov 10, 2008

    This is wonderful, may many read it and stop laughing at the home men and women. I will read anything you produce, so keep sending it out. I like your work.

  • Cheryl on Nov 10, 2008

    Wake up call, not a dream, huh? I will share this with many people because we often forget to give thoses in need. We should never feel like we are doing to much for people in need.

  • Donna on Nov 22, 2008

    Wow! is all I can say, powerful and a spirited reality for us all. I like it very much.

  • Jay John on Feb 7, 2010

    WOW oh WOW! That was a heavy load of truth. I really like it, so real and full of reality for us all. Thanks!

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