How one man’s junk became another’s treasure for seven wonderful years.

I’ll  always remember the first day we met.
It was love at first sight–on that you can bet.
She won everyone’s heart when I took her ’round
To show all my friends the sweet girl I’d found.

What great times we had when our lives became one.
Soon mundane activities turned into fun.
Sunday afternoon drives  and walks on the farm
And dips in the creek when the weather was warm.

Kisses would greet me when I would get back
From a day on the road and ready to hit the sack.
I didn’t care if she was a bed hog,
With her by my side I would sleep like a log.

Don’t think it was easy winning her heart.
She wasn’t ready to make a new start.
Dumped by her first love she trusted no one
But patience and tenderness got the job done.

Those days are gone now but mem’ries remain
Of the girl who once loved me.  O, how the pain
Of hearing the words that the Vet said to me:
Your old girl is gone now.  She went peacefully.

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  • Sarah Sullins on May 31, 2009

    Oh my goodness… I loved this. It sucked me in a like a great love story… Thank you for sharing this with us.

  • Mystify on May 31, 2009

    Absolutely beautiful.Wonderful story behind the poerty with so much feeling,happy verses sad ending.Excellent job,I loved it.

  • Darla Smith on May 31, 2009

    This is a beautiful and heartfelt poem!

  • goodselfme on May 31, 2009

    I was elated, happily included in the progression and saddened by the ending. I must admit I am a frilly girl liking happy endings.Yes, You delivered this well, my friend!

  • Sheila M on May 31, 2009

    Even if the ending was sad (which it always is in the end) the memories we end up with are beautiful

  • Kate Smedley on Jun 1, 2009

    Aah, how sad, nicely done though.

  • Michelle OLeary on Jun 1, 2009

    Aww, very sweet! Our pets just don’t ever live long enough…

  • Phill Senters on Nov 23, 2009

    That is sad. I wish dog lived at least as long as humans.

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