This is my ninth poem. It’s all about what is the secret behind starving.

I’m so starving but somehow I feel good on my heart.

The volume within my heart is so bright when that emptiness is occurred.

Indeed, the most frightening war is to conquer our evil desire.

What I learned today, is good to be alert when your stomach is empty because it will control our evil desires and in the end will contain our unconscious bad behavior.

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  • SimplyShash on Dec 18, 2010

    A spiritually inspiring post. Nice share.

  • JoniJones on Dec 18, 2010

    You are writing a lot, don’t stop!

  • PSingh1990 on Dec 19, 2010

    Nice Share.

    :-)

  • UncleSammy on Dec 23, 2010

    nice share, thank you , Merry x mass

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