Sins of commission…

Of course you’ll not die
You’ll become as wise as God.”
He’d told her she won’t be a sinner
She’d be a winner, a heroine, Victoria
She saw herself topping celebrity lists
Her dream since her young days;
She saw it an adventure worthy though dicey
The thought of how wonderful it’s
And then the cruise started
The exploration of the southern land
The adventure to forbidden land
She’s seduced.

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  • Cyni1106 on Jun 6, 2011

    Short and sweet, great. I liked it very much. Thanks

  • Elove Poetry on Jun 7, 2011

    welcome…. as always, my pleasure

  • Elove Poetry on Jun 7, 2011

    i would love to give more… your satisfaction is my joy

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