So many of us feel invisible to others and the world around us.

No one notices

Why should they?does it really matter what I say,
will it help,
will it make your tears fade away.

No need to mask nor hide,
my form is not difficult,
to brush a-side…
no one noticed the tears I cried
the first line, I paused to feel the pain inside.
Just to show the me, to share the me,
that you can’t see,
To tell you that I know what you think of me,
I may feel unnoticed, but I’m not blind,
I can hear the words that cross your mind.

And like I always say, thats just fine

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  • C A Johnson on Dec 17, 2007

    This poem is really deep. I know a couple of people who have gone through this. I used to go through it too.

  • Lucy Lockett on Dec 17, 2007

    I am reading your words and feeling each and every one of them.

  • francie on Dec 19, 2007

    So glad I stopped to read, I understand and can relate on
    some level to your spoken words. Nice job.

  • Darlene McFarlane on Dec 19, 2007

    Again,I feel the power of your words.

    Great Job!

  • Liane Schmidt on Dec 20, 2007

    This poem felt very wispy, stream of thought. It had accurately conveyed the pain of feeling unnoticed. Good work.

    Best wishes.

    Sincerely,

    -Liane Schmidt.

  • ranfuchs on Jan 17, 2008

    The best comment is from one of my favorite songs:

    People talking without speaking,
    People hearing without listening,
    People writing songs that voices never share
    And no one deared
    Disturb the sound of silence.

  • Amsky on Mar 11, 2009

    Great! I can relate to your words and message.Got to read more of your work…

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