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My balance just lost itself

I need someone to support itBut then I realize I’m all aloneWith no one here to guide me home

My breath has disappeared

I pushed air up to feel it

I hope to god I’m still alive

I need to know I’m not deprived I feel like a manA man who’s left to roam 
Now I can’t see youMy train of thought left me aloneNow I can’t hear you I feel as if I’m dead in stone

I’m blind from my hands and feet
I’m deaf from my sense of beat
I still think you’re better off
Without me now

I lost those words inside my head
I dug them deep beneath it

When I need them the most
They’re all replace with ghosts
I feel like a man
A man who’s all alone

Now I can’t see you
My train of thought left me alone
Now I can’t hear you
I feel as if I’m dead in stone

I’m blind from my hands and feet
I’m deaf from my sense of beat
I still think you’re better off
Without me now
Try this again

My mouth seems to lose its slack
My steps seem to fall off track
I still think you’re better off
Without me now
Without me now

I feel the poison

Flowing through my blood

I feel the dead

Lying beneath the mud

And then try to say that you’re alright

Now I can’t see you
My train of thought left me alone
Now I can’t hear you
I feel as if I’m dead in stone

I’m blind from my hands and feet
I’m deaf from my sense of beat
I still think you’re better off
Without me now
Try this again

My mouth seems to lose its slack
My steps seem to fall off track
I still think you’re better off
Without me now
Without me now
Without me now
Without me now

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