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My balance just lost itself
I need someone to support itBut then I realize I’m all aloneWith no one here to guide me home
My breath has disappeared
I pushed air up to feel it
I hope to god I’m still alive
I need to know I’m not deprived I feel like a manA man who’s left to roam
Now I can’t see youMy train of thought left me aloneNow I can’t hear you I feel as if I’m dead in stone
I’m blind from my hands and feet
I’m deaf from my sense of beat
I still think you’re better off
Without me now
I lost those words inside my head
I dug them deep beneath it
When I need them the most
They’re all replace with ghosts
I feel like a man
A man who’s all alone
Now I can’t see you
My train of thought left me alone
Now I can’t hear you
I feel as if I’m dead in stone
I’m blind from my hands and feet
I’m deaf from my sense of beat
I still think you’re better off
Without me now
Try this again
My mouth seems to lose its slack
My steps seem to fall off track
I still think you’re better off
Without me now
Without me now
I feel the poison
Flowing through my blood
I feel the dead
Lying beneath the mud
And then try to say that you’re alright
Now I can’t see you
My train of thought left me alone
Now I can’t hear you
I feel as if I’m dead in stone
I’m blind from my hands and feet
I’m deaf from my sense of beat
I still think you’re better off
Without me now
Try this again
My mouth seems to lose its slack
My steps seem to fall off track
I still think you’re better off
Without me now
Without me now
Without me now
Without me now
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