Poem about how the sense are so vital to everything we do,especially with love…

When all the sense are aroused,

there is no greater emotion,

or any mightier action,

then what the eyes have recorded…..

The taste buds will salivate,

like no other taste,

its secretion is so sweet,

every drop you will not waste…..

The ears hear music of love,

from the twang of the bed,

to the slapping of the bass,

and the ringing of the head…..

And what the fingers feel,

only lovers can reveal,

to the deep recesses of the fold,

they will find that pot of gold…………end………….

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Comments (14)
  • chellsy on Feb 17, 2010

    great poetry

  • Jenny Heart on Feb 17, 2010

    Wow!

  • 8Shei8 on Feb 17, 2010

    Nice piece of work! I need to pay attention more to my senses.

  • Authoress Terry E. Lyle on Feb 17, 2010

    You have five senses so we need to slow down and use them all. I don’t want to miss a thing. :)

  • Hansika on Feb 18, 2010

    Great share….keep writing….

    Lachu

  • LoveDoctor on Feb 18, 2010

    This is awesome. keep up the good work:)

    lol @ terry.

  • Sourav on Feb 18, 2010

    Exciting write! Well done!

  • Darla Cooke on Feb 18, 2010

    Great poem!

  • sambhafusia on Feb 18, 2010

    Excellent!!! well written …nice share..

  • albert1jemi on Feb 18, 2010

    great share

  • Cynthia Cox on Feb 18, 2010

    Thank you for sharing the expressions of why love is so great. Wonderful poem.

  • Trinket on Feb 23, 2010

    Very great share, but you forgot the pleasure of the scent. That, I lost at the age of 13.

  • Stan Wilson on Feb 23, 2010

    hahaha yes you are right Trinket,and that scent like all the others is very important to us to enjoy life….very sorry to hear you have lost that sense.thank you for reminding me of my error for omitting that from my poem..

  • aleah on Feb 24, 2010

    you write very well. thanks for sharing!

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