Sensual Melody

Katie Marie on Jul 23, 2009

Tags: flavor, fragrance, scent, tranquility

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My favorite fragrance and flavor. What is it?

Silken flow of caramel

Warm inviting glow of candle

Softness of newborn skin

Tempting sweetness all within

Scent of peace and harmony

Calming notes of symphony

Wrapped in simple luxury

Of sensual satisfaction

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Comments (11)

George W Whitehead on Jul 23, 2009
I give up, Katie. Is it some kind of chocolate bar?
BradONeill on Jul 23, 2009
I don’t know what it is But I cant wait to unwrap it, consume it, and enjoy it. Lovely poem my dear, lovely poem indeed!
cafftee on Jul 23, 2009
Yeah, my first thought was chocolate too. Nicely written poem.
Katie Marie on Jul 23, 2009
If my husband had written it, the answer would probably be chocolate, but not for me. ‘Scent of peace and harmony’
Try again.
Deep Blue on Jul 23, 2009
Nice flow of meaning.
Brave Photographer on Jul 23, 2009
Nice poem!
maranatha on Jul 23, 2009
Sounds like vanilla nougat
Katie Marie on Jul 23, 2009
And the winner is…Maranatha! Vanilla it is. Soft, smooth, warm and tranquil are the words that come to mind when I think of the scent and taste of vanilla. Only another vanilla lover would recognize it, I guess.
papaleng on Jul 23, 2009
a very lovely poem. so sweet.
kate smedley on Jul 24, 2009
Beautiful poem, I’m with you on vanilla …lovely work.
Duff D Moss on Jul 27, 2009
For a moment I thought you might of been talking about a baby – that new born baby smell.

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