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Sentimental Love

                              It’s a lovely poem

                              Of sentimental devotion,

If only you permit me to say,

Don’t repeat

The rising and falling that way,

Just alter it a bit here and there,

Then see from where

Your poem goes to where.

I thought as a friendly poet,

I ought to

With you share,

Remove this piece,

If you don’t care