Separation

neet on Nov 5, 2009

Tags: love, power of love, separation

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Love knows no Bounds.

If separation is the law of nature
Let us move apart from each other
And never reveal the underlying secret
That separation was never in our fate

For we reside in each other’s heart, meet in fantasies

Share one common dream and wait for eternities….

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Comments (15)

Teves on Nov 5, 2009
Very nice poem…
giftarist on Nov 5, 2009
Indeed love knows no bounds..Great work!
Christine Ramsay on Nov 5, 2009
That is such a lovely poem. well done.

Christine
chitragopi on Nov 5, 2009
So beautiful
ashan1614 on Nov 5, 2009
No time or distance can really separate us from those we love. Nicely said!
Darla Cooke on Nov 5, 2009
Lovely poem!
lillyrose on Nov 5, 2009
Really sweet!
Themax on Nov 5, 2009
I love no bounds too
Thanks for sharing
Jenny Heart on Nov 5, 2009
Beautiful!
Starpisces on Nov 6, 2009
A short but beautiful poem..liked it.
xoxo on Nov 6, 2009
Love the choice of words. Thank you.
Alexander Jay Sheridan on Nov 9, 2009
This poem is too idealistic. Try to focus on conveying these ideas using things.
Authoress Terry E. Lyle on Nov 18, 2009
Very good work.
AlmaG on Dec 2, 2009
What you said is true!
EK Encarnacion on Feb 18, 2010
The poem is short yet it has definitely caught my attention.

The lines were expressed beautifully (good choice of words!) and truly showed an overflowing emotion of true love.

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