A poem to celebrate a wonderful October evening.

The friendly scent of burning wood
comes to me on the chilled October air
as my breath billows visibly before me.

Leaves, bright living tapestries, sway gently,
in raw, colorful contrast to torn-cotton clouds,
as the pink twilight-sky darkens quickly to black.

Bright pinpricks of light pierce night’s shade,
marking the locations of stars a million years ago,
and I stop to admire this long out of date map.

I stand alone in an ever expanding universe,
in the dark, filled with myriad questions;
content, for now, to enjoy this Autumn evening.

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  • Salikhana on Oct 23, 2009

    Excellent. Something which I cannot define tells me that this is what poetry is all about, especially when I compare it to others\’ \”work\” here. \”I liked it\” a lot.

  • mystery writter on Oct 23, 2009

    Very nicely written and definatly an Autumn poem I liked very much.

  • cynthiac on Oct 30, 2009

    very nice!

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