Horse haiku.

                                   

                                                         Peacefully grazing

                                                     horses bring serenity

                                                       to ones troubled mind. 

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  • raman13 on Aug 27, 2009

    good stuff

    Beautifully Written

    Best Regards

  • Darla Cooke on Aug 27, 2009

    Nice haiku.

  • Mr Ghaz on Aug 27, 2009

    Wonderful haiku poem as always. I loved it.

  • Michael Degenhardt on Aug 27, 2009

    Short, but such a lovely read! Michael

  • Ramalingam on Aug 27, 2009

    A lovely haiku

  • Collette Edwards on Aug 27, 2009

    this is a hard poem to do, yet you do it so wonderfully. Love the pic :)

  • Lady Sunshine on Aug 27, 2009

    *drifting off to serenity*

  • Christine Ramsay on Aug 27, 2009

    A peaceful read. lovely work.

    Christine

  • sandie on Aug 27, 2009

    good haiku and good horse pictures.

  • Goodselfme on Aug 27, 2009

    Very well penned Haiku. Triond messed up your format.

  • Uma Shankari on Aug 27, 2009

    A good one.

  • Kate Smedley on Aug 27, 2009

    Nice haiku Ken!

  • Jenny Heart on Aug 27, 2009

    Carefully composed and beautifully written. Love it!

  • ceegirl on Aug 27, 2009

    didn’t know this

  • PR Mace on Aug 27, 2009

    Well said, I love horses, dogs, birds, most all animals. I love to play with my daughter’s three cats but they don’t mix well with my dogs and bird. Nice post, well written.

  • Tanya Wallace on Aug 27, 2009

    Wonderfully written haiku Ken,your words ring so true and are very thought provoking!Horse truly do bring serenity,I could stare at them forever watching their antics and moves,very intelligent animals.

  • Ruby Hawk on Aug 27, 2009

    That\’s a good one, Ken.

  • Daisy Peasblossom on Aug 27, 2009

    Pretty horses.

  • unown971 on Aug 27, 2009

    Short and good!

  • Vikram Chhabra on Aug 27, 2009

    Brief but beautifully succinct!!

  • Sarah Sullins on Aug 28, 2009

    Loved this. I love horses. :)

  • ducroisjosef on Aug 28, 2009

    Love the haiku’s. Nice picture too, beautiful horses and beautiful country.

  • nadinesimone on Aug 28, 2009

    Few words, big impact.

    Thank you for sharing your peace and serenity.

    Nadine

  • teddybear55 on Aug 30, 2009

    Very nicely done Ken. Descriptive words using a picture of horses. A great picture of peace and serentiy.

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