Serenity

ken bultman on Oct 25, 2009

Tags: boats, Day, park, sailing, serene, wind

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Sailing haiku.

A day at the park

becomes serene when boats are

sailing with the wind.

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Comments (21)

Guy Hogan on Oct 25, 2009
It is amazing what beauty can be created from a photo and 17 syllables. Good work.
Lostash on Oct 25, 2009
Glass of wine would just top it off too!
Tanya Wallace on Oct 25, 2009
What a lovely scene you have set in my mind!Fabulterrif.lol that is my new word and only you get it! Its means spectacular,I think lol
Chicks on Oct 25, 2009
nice written…
LoveDoctorLoveGoodBye on Oct 25, 2009
Great haiku. I like the sailboat image.
chitragopi on Oct 25, 2009
A haiku to match the photo. Beautiful.
cutedrishti8 on Oct 25, 2009
A wonderful image
ashan1614 on Oct 25, 2009
Nice one, Ken! The beauty if a summer day all wrapped up in 17 syllables.
Brenda Nelson on Oct 25, 2009
teasing me with palm trees
Joie Schmidt on Oct 26, 2009
Very peaceful, lovely*

Blessings.

Sincerely,

-Liane Schmidt.
Jenny Heart on Oct 26, 2009
So True!
wonder on Oct 26, 2009
Thse vertical sails and the horizontal waters–symmetrical and neat.
martinpm on Oct 26, 2009
the image is beautiful, great work.
Christine Ramsay on Oct 26, 2009
That is a beautiful scene and a lovely haiku to accompany it. Well done, Ken.

Christine
Lord Banks on Oct 26, 2009
Another good one liked that.
Papa Sparks on Oct 26, 2009
This was wonderful my friend. Good choice of words and images.
Darla Cooke on Oct 26, 2009
Very nice haiku.
PR Mace on Oct 26, 2009
You make me want to drift away. Nicely done.
Aiyanna on Oct 26, 2009
How true!!!
Faith Hodge on Oct 26, 2009
This is well done. I can feel it!!
Alexiandria M Michaels on Oct 27, 2009
Oh how I miss the sea, you said just enough to let our minds wander… loved it!

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