If salmon are so driven, people don’t stand a chance. We got to have it! Just don’t die for it.

Inspiration appears after the shortest year

Rinsing heartbroken from rain-filled misery

Trust is not a concern one should haggle with

Commitment exist underneath the pulsating rapids

Repetitive jolts moistening dormant sacs

The thought alone bares a naturalistic attraction

An aroma prevailing succulent evolution

Strong survival techniques rub satisfaction to the hilt

Kisses begin swimming up a free flowing stream

Dying to come into our original existence

Fusing penetration and determination in a nucleic bond

Prehistoric instincts feeding frenzied behavior

Tightness opened up letting remnants burst forth

Life fertilizing life, temptation grew

No force on earth could keep this from happening

Not once or twice, but a multitude of times

  

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  • Neva Flores on Jan 12, 2010

    Wow!…..this is intense. Very beautifully written.

  • LOVELYHONEY on Jan 12, 2010

    u encompass the entire dictionary

    i was thinking of everything sexually

    my mind is the otm kind

    where on earth will u ever

    another one of my kind

    ever if at all

    ever find

    gr88888888888

  • magicdarts on Jan 12, 2010

    fantastic sense of the struggle to survive and breed

  • Guy Hogan on Jan 12, 2010

    Wether it’s fish or people this is dripping with sex. And that’s a good thing.

  • diamondpoet on Jan 12, 2010

    It’s ashame that such beautiful writing isn’t pay the amount it’s really worth, outstanding work,

  • 8Shei8 on Jan 12, 2010

    Such vividness and colors in your words! Love it.

  • ashan1614 on Jan 12, 2010

    SO true, but we, as the only animals with the ability to reason (at least most of us) are supposed to be able to keep it in check. We could, in all actuality, die for it if we’re not careful.

  • willie wondka on Jan 12, 2010

    like fish we are driven to survive and walk the same way like sardines in a packed street, good poem.

  • AlmaG on Jan 12, 2010

    Excellent piece of poetry and very meaningful :)

  • AlmaG on Jan 12, 2010

    Excellent piece of poetry and very meaningful.

  • amilia snow on Jan 13, 2010

    Intense & a great piece, good job!!

  • alensmith on Jan 13, 2010

    great job

  • Christine Ramsay on Jan 13, 2010

    Wow! That is outstanding. You are such a talented writer.

    Christine

  • giftarist on Jan 13, 2010

    Well done.. Intense write!

  • Darla Cooke on Jan 13, 2010

    Great poem!

  • Linda Lori on Jan 13, 2010

    Excellent write!

  • alensmith on Jan 14, 2010

    nice article

  • thuanynguyen on Jan 14, 2010

    Amazing piece! I love it!

  • Themax on Jan 14, 2010

    really awesome and great write my friend,Thank you Just wow :)

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  • lillyrose on Jan 15, 2010

    This was another fantastic poem! the intensity gave me neck ache as I strain forward to take all the words in! Brilliant, I like your style and I think we are loosing our instinct a little.

  • qasimdharamsy on Jan 16, 2010

    Nice piece…wonderful….

  • standingproud on Jan 17, 2010

    awesome
    just top of the market.
    :)

  • Anupam Kachroo on Jan 19, 2010

    firmly executed ….

  • The Easy Way on Jan 20, 2010

    nice very nice!!!!!

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