Cannot resist his blue gaze.

The first time I saw my lover,

I noticed his sexy eyes.

Such a beautiful shade of blue,

like the clear Carolina skies.

 

I became lost in his gaze.

To him I have given my heart.

He is the center of my world.

I pray we will never be apart.

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  • Alicia Wind on Mar 27, 2009

    Loving and mesmerizing…

  • STEVE666 on Mar 27, 2009

    Nice poem Darla. Blue Carolina skies sound great—-much better than the grey skies of Birmingham, England.

  • hfj on Mar 27, 2009

    You made the love of your life blush. Nice poem Darla. Only one thing that i would change about it. Clear Kentucky skies would sounds more appropriate than Carolina skies. Ha! just kidding, well done.

  • rajeev bhargava on Mar 27, 2009

    i really enjoyed reading this poem.

  • kate smedley on Mar 28, 2009

    So lovely and romantic, it never ceases to amaze me how you can produce so many lovely poems.

  • CutestPrincess on Mar 30, 2009

    very romantic… you get me on this…

  • Denise Kawaii on Mar 30, 2009

    I had a blue-eyed wonder once. Great poem here – it took me back to another time.

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