The following poem is my contribution to Philly Dreamer’s challenge. I hope you will read it, comment if you choose. Two thumbs up on this poetry challenge.

SHADES OF HUMANITY

You,

me,

two people,

personalities…

just shades of our humanity;

perspectives that vary according to experience…

We

two;

just people

breathing the same air,

walking the same earth on the same planet in space…

And

we

are no more

and no less than the shades of our own humanity.

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  • ittech on Jan 13, 2012

    Good to learn about it.

  • Karen Gross on Jan 13, 2012

    Great poem, with a lot of truth packed in a few words.

  • PHILLY DREAMER on Jan 13, 2012

    I’m thinking of two people meeting for the first time, who may be from conflicting cultures, and they realize they can get a long, despite the worlds they com from.

  • The Spider And The Butterfly on Jan 15, 2012

    This sounds like a smooth pick up line. Almost Popeyesque in the way it is delivered. I am what I am. You are what you are. Sp lets be what we will be. LOL.

  • SharifaMcFarlane on Jan 16, 2012

    Good one for lovers.

  • Elove Poetry on Jan 17, 2012

    nice

  • touchmenot on Jan 18, 2012

    nice but sorry im sure this is not a fib… syllables should follow 1,1,2,3,5,8 syllables recheck your syllables…

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