I like this – the world that our imagination says exists just outside perception – lovely read- Thanks

a highly imaginative poem that poses the question of existance through shadows. i really enjoyed reading it. brilliant poetry.

I like this one. On the one hand, it is the kind of question children ask: Where does your shadow go when the sun doesn’t shine? On the other, it has a sort of existential questioning of the unseen/unknowable. Very, very nice.

Reminds me a bit of the Abney Park song “The Wrong Side”. Simple, but deep.

This was written well and makes a great poem about children.

Awesome…impressive write!

Annie,you’ve got to be the best mommy anybody could want,you poems and stories are always so cute.

that\’s great

You make a great teacher and mommy as you are able to enter the imaginative world of children.

Beautifully written and imaginative,

guess I`ll have to ask my kids these questions too..

Very imaginative!

like this – I think, as often happens, the first line is all important and pulls the rest along: “Do shadow children play when the sun goes away?” – really good
thanks – revivor

Very creative poem Annie and a very enjoyable read

Creative and full if imagination

Very imaginative, I bet your son loved this.

Cute poem Annie, I bet kids like this.

I enjoyed being in your fantasyland of shadows. Your imagination is great. Nice job

Great Imagination

Great work! ..that was beautiful and lovely poem.