Written for a mother grieving the miscarriage of her child.

Image by bradbridgewater via Flickr

 

Grieve your loss, let the tears flow.
An ache within you, that no one else knows.
No apologies needed, from your mother heart.
This babe was a part of you, from the very start.

Though daylight unseen, your child had life.
Tis the sorrow of death that cuts like a knife.
Honor this babe, do not leave without name
Acknowledge the love to which they have claim.

Childhood dreams you never got to see.
Gather your friends, “Come weep with me.”
Share your pain, words of anger too,
With willing hearts that will grieve with you.

Begin the healing, it will take some time,
From this pit of loss is an up hill climb.
No need to forget what might have been,
But look to the future…

and start again.

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  • deep blue on Oct 11, 2009

    A very touching poem. Thanks for sharing Katie.

  • ken bultman on Oct 11, 2009

    A very comforting write for those who must look to the future. For some the future is not as bright as others and for those, I weep.

  • Darla Cooke on Oct 11, 2009

    Very touching!

  • Duff D Moss on Oct 11, 2009

    Indeed very sad, and something my wife also had to deal with. I hope this brings some level of comfort to that for which it was written.

  • petercurtis97 on Oct 11, 2009

    I liked the honour of the persona

  • LOVELYHONEY on Oct 11, 2009

    laugh and the worlsd laughs with you

    just as sad

    if you weep u weep alone

    build up strength there is time to regain

  • Tlchimes on Oct 11, 2009

    I buried two infants who lived but a short hour , born two years and a week apart. Though I didn’t have to, the both had names and it helps to remember them.

    It will always hurt a bit but never like now. She will remember on the milestone years more then others. I wish her peace.

  • Karen Gross on Oct 11, 2009

    So beautifully poignant. Yes, we must allow the mothers to grieve the loss – a child who has a soul. One day they will be reunited.

  • Ruby Hawk on Oct 11, 2009

    A miscarriage is heartbreaking.

  • maranatha on Oct 12, 2009

    Beautiful, Katie. I have three grown sons, and seven children who I will meet one day in Heaven. It was difficult then, and the memory is still fresh today.

  • Fruit Sensation on Oct 12, 2009

    Great Human touch, very moving

  • Casey Mack on Oct 12, 2009

    Beautiful words for such a heartbreaking time.

  • RS Wing on Oct 12, 2009

    I\’ve personally experienced this type of loss and it is gut wrenching for both Mom and Dad. Your prose flows so well about a sad and ugly truth within our lives. Makes me feel blessed I have three that are happy, vibrant and alive with joy and love. Very well written poem Katie!

  • STEVE666 on Oct 12, 2009

    Great write, Katie on a difficult subject. Love the last line—so positive.

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