A subtle approach to intimacy.

May I come inside, to see where you live.
Let me inside, where you walk around.
To know your thoughts, all about your dreams,
So, that I might learn, just who you are.
Let me come, into your vivid world,
To converse, perhaps, to hear your sighs.
Endlessly roaming, through your ideas of life.
Where you are going, where you have been.
Please let me inside, the myriads of you.
We can explore the world, holding each other,
Together, forever, if you allow me inside.

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Comments (4)
  • IcyCucky on Apr 21, 2008

    I like it!

  • quiet voice on Apr 21, 2008

    ….Hi, IC, thank you kindly.

  • TP Sage on Apr 25, 2008

    Wonderfully romantic in a very gentle, sweet and not saccharine way.

  • quiet voice on Apr 25, 2008

    …Hi TP, thank you for your
    nice assessment, I appreciate
    your thoughts. Take care.

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